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Hero Essay Clincher


    Heroes are generally people whom we admire. Anti-heroes are people who try to harm others, while true heroes are people who strive to bring goodness to our world.

    What are the qualities of true heroes? Here are some to consider . . .
• strength and/or stamina
• determination
• bravery (willingness to risk one’s own safety to help others)
• kindness
• independence (the willingness to do what is right despite opposition)
• intelligence (the ability to notice what is needed)
• wisdom (the ability to make good judgment calls)

Write an essay about a hero in a novel or someone from real life.

For help in choosing a hero, click HERE .

 Once you’ve chosen your hero, you may follow this outline . . .
Paragraph One: Introduction
Paragraph Two: Describe one quality of your hero
Paragraph Three: Describe another quality of your hero
Paragraph Four: Describe a third quality of your hero, the most important quality
Paragraph Five: Conclusion

Here is a more detailed outline for an essay on a hero:

    People talk about heroes. People admire all sorts of traits. But what are the qualities of a real hero?  What are the qualities of someone who actually does good in this world? In my mind, there are three main ones: ___________ ,  ___________  and _________________ . And to my mind, ____________ is a person who portrays all these qualities.
    ____________ is the first quality that is shown by _________ , (next tell how you know this person; e.g.. ‘my best friend’, ‘a Canadian athlete’, ‘the main character in the novel Shiloh by P.R. Naylor’) _____________. (Now describe how that quality is shown in 3 to 5 sentences.) ________________________
    _____________is another quality of _________ .  (Describe how it is shown.) ____________
    The most important quality of this hero, though, is ________________ . (Describe how it is shown. ) __________________
    ___________________ is, in my mind, a true hero. (Pronoun) _______ clearly shows the qualities of ___________, _______________ and ________________ . (Add a memorable and emotive concluding sentence.) ______________

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An example by Saniya in grade eight:

Many people have been heroes during times of war and many novels depict people with heroic behavior. Iqbal Masih in Iqbal: A Novel by Francesco D’adamo (Simon and Schuster Children’s Publishing Division, 2001) is one of those admirable characters.

Iqbal definitely shows compassion. He runs away from his master’s, Hussain Khan’s, carpet factory and has multiple options to regain his long deserved freedom and lost childhood. He can go back home, run away to another city and start over, or even find a job at the marketplace and try to blend in, but no; Iqbal has concern for his fellow labourers back at the carpet factory and chooses to draw attention to himself – sacrificing his chance at freedom – to ” help [himself] and his friend[s]” (72). So he goes to some police officers and reports his cruel master which ends up backfiring and getting him sent to the tomb – a traumatizing hot creepy dark place full of spiders and scorpions- for six days. Still, he has no regrets on ending up bonded after trying to help his friends. The next spring, after finally accomplishing his goal of freeing Hussain’s bonded labourers, his waterfall of compassion continues flooding Lahore. He makes a solemn declaration that despite his new freedom, and although he can do anything he pleases, he “want[s] to stay and help… free all the children in Pakistan” (91).

Iqbal shows responsibility. He has a great capability to remain calm and collected despite the hatred he has against Hussain, “The only one who remain[s] untouched by Hussain’s storm of hatred [is Iqbal]” (38).

Iqbal also shows perseverance. He tries to explain to his fellow labourers that their debt will never be erased and although they do not believe him, eventually due to his persistence, the reality faces them. Also, the first time Iqbal rebels against Hussain Khan, he is sent to the Tomb for three suffering days. This doesn’t faze him, though. His perseverance encourages him to run away from the carpet factory. When he goes on his adventure after running away for the first time, he discovers that labour is not right and that he and his friends should be freed. After he tries to get help for his factory members and fails, he still does not give up. His persistence encourages him to run away for a second time and find the anti-bondage labour activists. Eventually Iqbal’s astounding perseverance pays off and he manages to free himself, his fellow labourers, and many other bonded labourers across Pakistan.

Finally, Iqbal shows courage. It takes a lot of bravery to stand up to so many important and powerful people. He does exactly that with Hussain Khan. Knowing that his master’s capabilities are so high and that he can easily torture him, Iqbal still finds the courage within himself and decides to rebel against his master and succeeds by freeing himself and his friends.  Despite his long-waited freedom, this inspiring thirteen-year-old boy decides that he will sacrifice all of the freedom that he has finally gained to help free other child labourers. Knowing that each time he invades a carpet factory, he is holding his life in his hands, he still goes willingly. As you can see, Iqbal is very courageous.

Iqbal Masih, in Iqbal: A Novel shows all these admirable traits common to heroes: compassion, responsibility, perseverance, and courage. Whether in times of peace or times of war, Iqbal Masih is an inspirational humanitarian who will be remembered forever.

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Hey so I'm just wondering if you could proofread this for me? It needs to be in third person and I also need to add a clincher sentence to the conclusion (I can't think of one) I need to argue why I believe Brutus is the tragic hero

In William Shakespeare's The Tragedy of Julius Caesar Marcus Brutus' naivete diminishes his otherwise noble character. He is easily manipulated, disregards the advice of others and is deceived by Antony, which results in his downfall.

In his well executed speech, he explains his understanding of the situation to the plebeians and cleverly questions theirs: "Not that I loved Caesar less, but that I loved Rome more. Had you rather Caesar were living and die all slaves than that Caesar were dead to live all free men?" This effective and unanswerable question lingers through the Roman crowd. He appeals to their patriotism and rationality while indirectly stating that he cares more about others than he does himself. Because along with being noble, he is also very selfless and has never deceived anyone. Moreover, Brutus claims that Caesar's ambitions aren't as important to him as the freedom and happiness of Rome. For these reasons Antony recognized Brutus as "the noblest Roman of them all."

Brutus has great promise, ability and integrity of character. However, he also has a tragic fault: a lust for power. The reason being is that even though it was Cassius who started the conspiracy, it was Brutus who took charge. He disregards opinions and makes the final decisions in hope to overpower Caesar. This leads to him single-handedly persuading the Romans into believing he saved them from a monstrous tyranny. Overall, he always had correct intentions and never did what he did out of jealousy. For this reason he is well respected for being the only honourable conspirator with heart.

One of Brutus' many bad decisions was that he overlooked Antony's loyalty and Caesar's ambition. The main reason for which he killed Caesar was simply due to the fact that Cassius forged him letters insisting him to do so. He was then manipulated by Antony to have permission to speak at Caesar's funeral. Furthermore, if he had listened to Cassius who initially warned him about Antony, he could have avoided his anticipated yet tragic demise. Nonetheless, in the end Antony honours Brutus by his death: "So mixed in him that Nature might stand up and say to all the world, 'This was a man!'"

In conclusion, Brutus is defeated because of his tragic flaw. He started a personal war against Antony which evolved into a triumphant battle between the Romans. However, the fact that Antony is a better orator than Brutus may be a contributing factor to his victory. He is able to speak with more hatred and logic than any of the conspirators, lending him an advantage in numbers. Overall, Brutus had more determination than anyone. Even his enemy acknowledged him for being vigorous and honourable.